Friday, 12 March 2010
thriller feedback
mise-en-scene
- use filters to make lighting in the woods more dark and creepy
- the lighting is a little too dark at the end, edit it to make it lighter
- location- no link to why they are in the woods. add props and show how they got location
camera work
- good hand held/ point of view
- range of shot types
- hand held too shaky
- establishing shot would make audience understand more
sound
- make music in sync
- make it more diegetic
- music does not fit the film
- add folly
editing
- add contras into the beginning bits to draw viewer in more
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There where no Titles in this opening TITLE sequence neither was there any sound. The footage was good but it wasn't using all the basic thriller conventions and made a poor thrilling opening title sequence.
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